Monday, November 16, 2009

CHRISTMAS CHRISTMAS HELP PLEASE!!!!!!! thanks !!!?

Can you please help me with this ...i need help adding more to my poem for my mom and dad for xmas ..and i don't know what else to add ...please answer ...please ideas please !!!





Flurries are falling, Sidewalks are white


bells are jingling, christmas is tonight


I smile, because we are all together


happily, merrily, it couldn't be any better








Its the most wonderful time of the year


Being with family and having good cheer


Can't think of a place I'd rather be


Because you mean the world to me

CHRISTMAS CHRISTMAS HELP PLEASE!!!!!!! thanks !!!?
that's so sweet...i am sure you can come up with some more lines...it should be from you. Otherwise....short and simple is sweet too
Reply:Why do you need to add anything else? it is lovely as it is! x
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Reply:I don't think you need to add anything to it! It's perfect already and I think your parents will love it just the way it is! Good luck if you really want to write more lines! Sorry I dont have any ideas. I can see that you are good at writing poetry though, so if you don't think so hard I think you will find just what you are looking for. merry christmas!
Reply:Lol its nice lol... x


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