Monday, November 16, 2009

CHRISTMAS HELP PLEASE !!!!!!! Thanks so much ! PLEASE HELP!?

Okay so i want to write out a poem for my mom and dad for xmas and i want to laminate it etc. ....Does this sound okay ? Can you help me with it ...can you add some more rymes to it ..because i am having a lot of trouble LOL ..here it is





Flurries are falling, Sidewalks are write


bells are jingling, christmas is tonight


I smile, because where all together


happily, merrily, it couldn't be better





Its the most wonderful time of the year


being with family and having good cheer


I can't wait till next year


so lets all get together and have a beer !








Please help me add some more stuff ....ideas plese ! THanks !

CHRISTMAS HELP PLEASE !!!!!!! Thanks so much ! PLEASE HELP!?
i don't have any ideas but you could search christmas poems too get some idea's.


it sounds really good as it is now.
Reply:Sidewalks are write? I'd change that to white...it would make more sense. lol
Reply:you are supposed to put we are and not where in the third line

flowers and gifts

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